Want personalized feedback on one of your pitches? Here's how to play:
1. Send your nonfiction query to kelly at becomebodywise.com by Monday, April 18, 2011. Make sure you put "Query Critique Week" in the subject line.
2. Cross your fingers and hope that your query gets picked to be critiqued here on my blog. (I'll only be able to choose a few.)
3. Tune in next week!
That's it! For a look at the queries from last year's query critique week and my feedback on them, check out these posts:
Fitness pitch
Swiss chard pitch
Street harassment pitch
Memoir pitch
Declutter pitch
By the way, if you wrote one of these queries last year, please let me know what happened with it!
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Hi Kelly,
ReplyDeleteI love this query review stuff.
I wrote the swiss chard query and you can read that story on page 54 of the Jan/Feb 2011 issue of Urban Farm Magazine. They didn't put it online...rats.
Hey, that's great, Carol! Thanks for letting me (and us) know! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Kelly,
ReplyDeleteWell, my idea and your critique were solid but I didn't manage to pitch it to the right people/at the right time. Marie Clarie has a street harassment feature running in their May issue and Women's Health may have a piece on it soon. Neither by me :( So it goes.
Cheers! brittany
Don't give up, Brittany--it's a great idea and a well-written query. Look for some other markets for it, and keep me posted. :)
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