tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post4397047919769192952..comments2024-03-29T04:56:56.407-07:00Comments on Dollars and Deadlines: Let the Query Critique Month Begin! Second Act Parenting QueryAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12518158232642872324noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post-35165442149737448272012-06-06T06:59:40.982-07:002012-06-06T06:59:40.982-07:00Good topic, needs some reworking, so I think you a...Good topic, needs some reworking, so I think you are right on.eliana23https://www.blogger.com/profile/02127376335232348020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post-905899449014283992012-06-05T13:08:26.816-07:002012-06-05T13:08:26.816-07:00I agree -- I think the intro line about When baby ...I agree -- I think the intro line about When baby Lila was welcomed confused me. I can definitely 'see' some of the images that she writes about: nursing during the conference and dealing with the stroller. Those are good descriptive grafs!Mollyhttp://www.mollyblake.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post-39209804115203403252012-06-05T08:16:44.546-07:002012-06-05T08:16:44.546-07:00You're very welcome, Carrie Anne! Readers, wha...You're very welcome, Carrie Anne! Readers, what do you think?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12518158232642872324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post-7805985487604568852012-06-05T07:52:36.003-07:002012-06-05T07:52:36.003-07:00I think you nailed the parts that are troubling. :...I think you nailed the parts that are troubling. :-) And I like the distinction between "profile" and "anecdote." That makes sense. Thanks for a helpful critique!Carrie Anne Schmeckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03345303424053526414noreply@blogger.com