tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post920972878801187158..comments2023-08-23T01:12:35.906-07:00Comments on Dollars and Deadlines: Query Critique #3: Street Harassment PitchAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12518158232642872324noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post-52031225413330355922010-07-21T11:39:40.445-07:002010-07-21T11:39:40.445-07:00Great catch, Becky! Neither I nor the writer caugh...Great catch, Becky! Neither I nor the writer caught that...thanks for your comment!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12518158232642872324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7956176634474051220.post-74381180242210185772010-07-21T11:25:58.346-07:002010-07-21T11:25:58.346-07:00There's a word missing in the very first sente...There's a word missing in the very first sentence. It should have "be" or "get" in front of shouted. I like your idea of making it a more general piece rather than sounding so promotional of the mentioned author.beckyhttp://beckyscorner.comnoreply@blogger.com